Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-4783583-20170313192210/@comment-4896558-20170830134456

Jaadowgg wrote: After looking at the chapter in question, I can hazard a guess as to what you are referring to, but I am still confused as to how it can be interpreted as to Paku's death being in vain. Do you think you could explain how it can be interpreted as such? (I was going to suggest "spoiler" tags, but apparently I forgot that there are no such things as hiding spoilers on wikis, which is stupid. I guess alternatively, you could change the color of your text to white. That way, one would need to highlight said text in order to read it.)

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Jaadowgg wrote: After looking at the chapter in question, I can hazard a guess as to what you are referring to, but I am still confused as to how it can be interpreted as to Paku's death being in vain. Do you think you could explain how it can be interpreted as such? (I was going to suggest "spoiler" tags, but apparently I forgot that there are no such things as hiding spoilers on wikis, which is stupid. I guess alternatively, you could change the color of your text to white. That way, one would need to highlight said text in order to read it.)

I'll post it later on the spoilers forum.

OnePieceNation wrote: Why ain't nobody commenting on my story?

I just turned on my comp and saw your story, I'll read it later and then give my opinion on it.

Pigzillion wrote: Cause it's fuckin' long!! It's not fun to see a wall of text 4000 words long out of nowhere and being told to comment on it!

Question: Why even?

Well I like supporting people's art by giving critique and not the kind that's like "It sucks!" And give no explanation of why it is. I mean I posted a story here once, and got good feedback, mind you it wasn't all that great, but I plan to edit it more in the future and perhaps write another one if I feel like it.