Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-25814498-20170501170235/@comment-25814498-20171226132428

Pretty fucking funny, but not bad. A few questions:

1) What exactly does the user do in order to control the Captives? Do they simply need to keep their focus their mind, akin to regular manipulation, or do they need to take more physical actions in order to keep them under control?

2) What is the range of the Captives rusting ability? You have stated that they must stay a certain distance to the user but haven't made the range of their powers explicit.

3) How long does the rusting process take?

4) Will a Captive who was originally a Nen User perform differently to one that was simply a civilian?

Depending on the answers to the former questions, the second and third in particular, this Hatsu may be somewhat overpowered, so I would take this into consideration and perhaps think of some revised limitations as a result.