Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-25814498-20190719190634/@comment-43918586-20190924084739

Name: cosmic messenger Type: emission Description: writes down a message in English, including the name of the receiver, the city and street they are in. The user can then summon a nen beast which takes the form of the person on the ‘cosmic messenger’ album cover and gives it the paper. The messenger will read it and go to the receiver. The nen beast will then read out the message. Any attack will pass through it. Limitations: if an attacker can see both the cosmic messenger and the user, all damage to the messenger will be transferred to the user tenfold. The user can’t call the cosmic messenger back until it has sent its message.

Name: Cosmic Messenger 2. Type: emission + manipulation Description: The user emits cosmic messenger, but calls out ‘cosmic messenger 2’. The cosmic messenger can send messages that aren’t verbal, like ‘punch the guy in front of me’ or ‘grab the paper’. Limitations: Cosmic messenger 2 is visible to even non nen users two metres away from it. It’s power is the same as the original cosmic messenger, but it manipulates itself to transfer all unnecessary aura to the parts of the messenger’s body that is needed for the message. The level of manipulation (and other types of nen) is the same as the users level of manipulation, so it can’t have complete control of a person if the user can’t do that with nen. If it is interrupted while it is being used, a crack will appear. 3 cracks and the messenger will break and die along with the user.

Is this balanced? It’s my first hatsu