User blog comment:Jojo-a-gogo/ What would your nen ability be?/@comment-27123381-20151026232812

I took it upon my self to make and use Nen Abilities in little my fiction. however I feel them lacking and sometimes flawd. so to attain peace of mind I need your feedback. thank you. Now, the first one...

Specialist Ability: The Word (Za Worudo, JoJo refrence there lol)

Speaking verbs will make them happen.

General Limitations:

1-Verbs must be spoken.

contradiction: to say it in your head

2- The first letter of the first verb used will be decided by the last letter anyone else said.

e.g A: You fool! NU: Verb: Lit. "enemy is lit".

3- Chaining verbs is by only making the last letter of the last verb used the first letter of the now one e.g NU: Verb: Cu(t). Verb: (T)ear.

3- Verbs are one per person. Cooldown = 2 days

meaning that you can't use the same verb on a person twice if two days haven't passed.

e.g Punch --) Heal --) Lit --) Touch --) (Heal) X (You can't use heal on the same person that you used it on again)

4- Verbs that has the same meaning are considered 1 Verbs but with two ways of using it.

you can use any word for it's only meaning

e.g Rip&Tear have the same meaning so you can use either but not both


 * not to confused with verbs that vary in degree

e.g Lit&Egnite egnite is a little rougher than lit so you can use both

5- Words that has multiple meaning are considered multiple words with one way to say it

it's the oppeset of the fourth limitation

e.g Run. you can use the word for one of it's many meanings

6- Verbs must be made of one word

e.g Kill, Breathe. Contradiction e.g lose consciousness, go crazy.

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Now the nature of activating verbs differ in some aspects. (Here it can get a bit confusing)

but first let's clear some things first, there will be some terms to be kept in mind

-Physical Verbs (P): verbs that has a physical effect  e.g punch,cut,ignite

-Spiritual/Mental Verbs (S): the exact opposet of (P). e.g cry,die,fear

+Variant Verbs (V): verbs that vary in effect. e.g punch, slash, Jump, fear

+Invariant Verbs (I): the exact opposet of (S). e.g die, Cut, tear

$Causing Verbs (C): Verbs that describe the cause of an effect. e.g rip, Kill, sleep

$Effect Verbs (E): The exact opposet of (C). or verbs the describe the effect of a cause e.g bleed, die, relax

So in general there are 8 types of verbs

PVC e.g Punch

PVE e.g Burn

PIC e.g Rip

PIE e.g Fall

SVC e.g Stun

SVE e.g Laugh

SIC* e.g  sense

SIE* e.g Die


 * these are pretty rare

now that we got that cleared up we can indulgle in the nature of activating Verbs

1-Touch (By Hands or Weapon/sword)

For  -PVC-  -PIC-  -PVE-

2- Target being in 5m radius

For  -SVC-  -PIE-  -SVE-

3- Target being in 50m radius

None harming verbs

4- Target being in sight

harming and none enhansing verbs

5- Grabing, looking at the target for 5s then saying the verb

The Verb -Die-

lovely, now, I know it's already complicated enough but we are going to dive even deeper.

)---Omni Verbs---(

As the name intails, these are verbs that mess with the fabric of reality

Now due to the Omni Verbs power they will obviously have strict limitations.

Omni Verb: Reverse the Universe

To make Actions cause reversed effects

e.g punches heal instead of damaging, anitdotes infect instead of curing

Limit:-

1- 30 Verbs have been used.

2- They all have to be V verbs.

3- Affects foes for 10s.

4- When used again time lessens by 1s.

5- Affects the user for ten verbs.

6- Cannot switch to any OV until all 10 verbs are used.

7- If all 10 verbs are used 20s must pass until you can switch any other OV

8- If all 10 verbs are used 10s must pass until you can use the next verb

9- If all 10 verbs are used you are left in a state of zetsu for 5s

10- the 10 verbs used aren't counted as trigger verbs for the next OV

Omni Verb: Stop the World

To make actions cause no effect.

e.g punches do no damage, Vaccines heal no illnesses


 * if an effect is in progress before the ablity is activated the effect will not stop

e.g someone is bleeding and he goes for a punch Stop the World is activated his punch will do no damage and he will continue to bleed but he will not die because that is an effect, until the ability warns off.

Limit:-

1- 40 verbs are used

2- They all Have to be C verbs

3- Affects foes for 0.1s the first time, the second 1s, the third 3s the fourth 5s the fifth 10s

4- Maximum usage is 6 times

5- Affects the user as well except for the 5th and 6th time.

6- If used a sixth time cooldown triples

7- Cannot switch to other OV until the ability is used 5 times at least.

8- 20s must pass untill you can switch to any other OV

9- 10s must pass until the usage of the next verb

10- you are left in a state of zetsu for 5s

Omni Verb: Make the Heavens

Ability to make anything

Limit:-

1- 20 Verbs are used

2- They all have to be E Verbs

3- Limit up to 10 things

4- If all at once 5 things will be made and the limit will be reached

5- If not all at once, 5s intrivals are in between

6- Things will Stay for 30s if not transformed into any other form of matter else. e.g Make the Heavens is activated and a sandwich is made it will disappear in 30s if not consumed.

7- Cannot switch to any Omni verb until all things disappear or are transformed.

8- After all things disappear or are transformed  20s must pass until you can switch any other OV

9- After all things disappear or are transformed 10s must pass until you can use the next verb

10- After all things disappear or are transformed you will be left in a state of zetsu for 5s

Omni Verb: Do the Impossible

Break the boundries of capableties

e.g you can exceed light speed, you be at two places at once (these are extreame examples)

1- 50 verbs are used

2- They all must be P verbs

3-This mode lasts for 5min

4- Time limit will lessen in cordination with action performed e.g if actions are extreme like e.g above then the mode's limit will lessen as extreme as the action performed

5- Verbs cannot be used in this mode

6- Cannot switch to any OV until Mode Limit is reached.

7- After Mode Limit is reached  20s must pass until you can switch any other OV

8- After Mode Limit is reached 10s must pass until you can use the next verb

9- After Mode Limit is reached you will be left in a state of zetsu for 5s

Omni Verb: Be the All

Omnisense, to simply know

e.g Be the all is used, now you can know anything about everything.

1-60 verbs are used

2- 40 must be S verbs

3- 20 must be I verbs

4- Mode lasts 2min

5- User Will become Blind, Deaf, Mute after mode limit is reached.

6-Cannot switch to any Omni verb until Mode Limit is reached.

7-After Mode Limit is reached  20s must pass until you can switch any other OV

8-After Mode Limit is reached 10s must pass until you can use the next verb

9-After Mode Limit is reached you will be left in a state of zetsu for 5s

Omni Verb: Shambles the Soul

Switches spiritual causes with physical causes while leaving the effect

e.g Shambles the soul is activated, now suprising will cause paralysis and doing anything that usually causes paralysis will cause awe and shock instead.

Limit:-

1- 40 verbs are used

2- 20 are P verbs

3- 20 are S verbs

4- Zone activates for 30s

5- Time lessen with each usage by half

6- Maximum usage times are 4 times

7- Cannot switch to any Omni verb until Zone used 4 times.

8- After Zone is used 4 times 20s must pass until you can switch any other OV

9- After Zone is used 4 times 10s must pass until you can use the next verb

10- After Zone is used 4 times you will be left in a state of zetsu for 5s

Final Two Abilities...

Ability:- Lore of Existence

Enable you to use Two OV at once

Limit:-

1- Verb count for both must be used

2-Type of verbs included

3- Thier time lessons by Quarter

4- Petnality time is 4 times both abilities' petnalities combined

LAST RESORT: Ability: Allah's Murcey

No Limits on The Word

Limits:-

1-Mode lasts for 10s

2-After Mode limit is reached Nen is sealed for a 7 days 7 hours 7 min 7 sec

3-You won't be able to move muscle for 6 days 6 hours 6 min 6 sec

"SIGH" wow, it's 3am already. Well, anyway that was my first and stupidly long nen ablity. If you did infact read all of this then props to you. If you read and gave me your feedback than you deseve a standing ovation. If read and enjoyed and gave me your feedback than I thank you from the bottom of my heart.