Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-48285-20140714145710/@comment-48285-20140717170539

STORY TIME! This is the part where I bring the story together. Thanks to OPN for making some posts work within the context of a story. Now, I think about every 50 posts or so (this is just past 50 now) I'll bring it together with "STORY TIME!" at the top of the post. So, here's the story so far:

"Gon and Killua received a message from a person who they thought died months ago. They were in an abandoned mansion retrieving Kite's body (w)hen suddenly a knife was thrown, aimed at them. Thankfully, it missed them and g(ot) stuck in the void of space. The boys turn(ed) around to see nothing but a white bed sheet and they decide(d) it must have some clue on the guy who (had) attacked them.

Killua tells Gon to stand back as he unleashes a thunderbolt towards the dirty bed sheet. The sheet flies to the basement (and,) suddenly, Hisoka appears from a dark (corner) staring at their bums and young (bodies), feeling all tingly. He pulls out a playing card and says that Gon and Killua should not be (t)here. He adds that something is fishy in East Gorteau and that people were under the "Spatial Veil" ability that Chrollo stole. Hisoka then suddenly asks the two (boys) to meet him in a(n) amusement park for some secret information about the Phantom Troupe."

Notes: This is where I point out any changes that I have made to the story. I'll point out what I took out and what I replaced. The things I added are clear, as they will be in parentheses (). I won't be numbering the changes, because if I do, I feel the numbers would need to be continued to the next Story Time (like, say if I made 5 changes this time around, next time, I would start the changes at 6). So, I'm just gonna make bullet points for them. Anyway, here are the changes:

- I made the first paragraph past tense.

- I changed FinalFlash's "attacked at them".

- I combined FinalFlash's end of sentence and Animesuki's start of sentence.

- I added in OPN's edits.

CONTINUE! (It means, "carry on with the story", in case you were wondering.)

the Phantom Troupe.