Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-25814498-20150505201606/@comment-25814498-20170314181036

I agree with Hrod; it's most likely a mix of Conjuration and manipulation.

@Hxhrod: I won't give any feedback other than the following:

1) Add more limitations in general. Almost all of the concepts you've posted till now have been ridiculously over-powered past the point of absurdity with little to no repercussions. Look through the earlier concepts above by people like me, MartialManiac, DinoTaur etc, as they should give you some inspiration/a template for more appropriate and creative limitations for your Hatsu Concepts, other than just limitations on how many times you can use the ability or a cool-down effect.

2) Please stick to the template provided above. It makes the ideas much easier to read and less cluttered any messy. And linked with that, please also check your grammar and punctuation, again in order to make it easier to read, as well as more impressive and professional looking. There's an application called Grammarly which can be very helpful, and it's also free.

3) Mach 10 is ten times the speed of sound; more than 2 thousand miles an hour. That's more than 10 times the speed of The King, and a touch more than "Enhanced speed".