Board Thread:General Discussion/@comment-25814498-20170501170235/@comment-34090215-20171226065709

Hello guys,I would like you to revise my Hatsu,if that's fine with you...If my writing's. Aa little sloppy I delude my warnings and I'm sorry...I am a forgotren Englishman on the verge of going insane(sarcasm lol)...Anyways,this is my famed Hatsu...

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Name: Rocketboy

Type:Specialist

This hatsu requires the user to take his saliva and insert it into the mouth of an unsuspecting person to takeover their body to control the enviroment around using a very particuular element he favors:rust...Anyone he takes as a "captive" can manipulate the objects around them to turn them into rust,decay their material quickly,and all aroumd use their body as a suicidal "bomb" of sorts that rusts others in the procces...Now the Hatsu is required to make a "captive" the user can have up to 30 captives at a time,but the more "captives" he have the more "perimeter he must keep them close to him


 * 10 Captives(1O circular feet from him)
 * 20 Captives(8 feet)
 * 30 captives(5 feet)

Limitations: As said the user must be NATURALLY sneaky,he also must insert his saliva into the mouth of another person for this to activate,or get them to open their mouths and repeat theses words,"Eat my saliva" then the opponent becomes in a trance and willingly eats the saliva...

Also,his saliva must be acidic,so the user must drink many sodas,and acidic beverages

Finally,the user must keep control of his "captives" unless they will go berserk and try to kill their "Detainer"...